Passion and Purity bugs me for many reasons, the foremost of which is the bad relationship advice and iffy theology. But the first thing that bugged me about this book when I read it in my late teens was the style. The chapters all include poetry snippets, quotes from the Psalms and old hymns, and the romance narrative is frequently interrupted by paragraphs or even pages of introspection. I understand why Elliot chose to write this way–at each turn, she is deliberately trying *not* to rush into the next step. The halting writing style is fitting for a halting romance.
The problem is that we readers get to an interesting part of the story, end the chapter on a cliffhanger, and then begin the next chapter with a verse from a sober hymn or contemplative Psalm. There is of course a place for Psalms and hymns, but as a reader in the middle of a story, this is very frustrating. We’re in chapter 10! We are ready for action! In the first few chapters I read all the quotes because I was trying to get to the bottom of her argument. But now we know her argument, so the repetition of spiritual reminders seems redundant and, more importantly, gets in the way of the story arc. This chapter, for instance, has three long quotes over the course of 2.5 pages–easily half of the chapter. Later, in chapter 23, she takes a complete break from the epic romance to once again berate feminists for destroying romance. I can’t tell if she doesn’t trust her gentle readers to remember the argument she laid out in chapter one, or if she wants to continually remind us how different she is from The World. Maybe it’s both. Either way, it’s annoying. Continue reading